Own Film Treatment

Own Film Treatment

At the beginning of our film it starts of with Charlotte carrying boxes inside the house and then upstairs to put them into her room, she mentions to Scott when coming in the house that there are still more boxes outside. Charlotte then makes her way up the stairs and goes to shout to Scott out of her bedroom window, and then notices somebody standing outside all in black ( Kieran) and this then creeps Charlotte right out which makes her gasp and have an outstanding facial expression. At the end this cuts to and from the figure and he ends up dead on the floor outside, the location outside looks very mysterious where Kieran is located and this is effective towards the audience because it makes them worry on what is happening and what is going on. After this part there is a clip of Charlotte waking up from a dream, this is effective because it is something that the audience wouldn't expect to happen and it is very unordinary. Charlotte then walks downstairs from her room and goes outside to check if she can find the guy dressed in black because she is so sure that he is outside because she doesn't believe that it is a dream and then she turns round and he is behind her although she didn't know that.


I think the audience will enjoy this film because it is a very mysterious opening two minutes and include a twist in the end so they will be surprised on what happened and this will keep them on edge so they will want to carry on watching to see what happens and how it all plans out.